essay relfection

I felt fairly good about my essay score, but agree that it needs improvement. The thesis I wrote was thought out well, but written poorly according to words. I stated that what was occuring in the quote was foreshadowing the novel, but I should have written what occurs in the scene that it is actually foreshadowing. I should have used more quotes and maybe weeved them into my essay.  I also could have gone onto the point of view of the people, then Meursault, and then how it foreshadows and describes the novel as a whole. I feel strong about my writing but would love to improve to gain the highest possible score that I can.